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[流域风] 【妻子的欲望】二十八

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1楼大中小发表于 2014-4-13 16:37 显示全部帖子

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这篇文章貌似在别处连载完了，有点虎头蛇尾的感觉，人物心理描写和场景设置都非常好，女主人那种被欺凌的细节描写非常到位。更希望有人能改写一下，比如偷拍的小龙要胁女主人并与其发生关系等等。

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x241234 金币 +4 认真回复，奖励！ 2014-4-13 17:32

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