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[流域风] 【陈皮皮的斗争】十八

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陈皮皮这篇文章十分精彩,题材也很流行,关键我个人看好的有几点.一,人物刻画的很精致,性格非常突出也很丰满,让人有种确有其人的感觉.二,故事简单却富有幽默感.三,文笔细腻让人热血沸腾.确实是不可多得的好文.感觉要是在肉戏里再多点重口味就好了,这么长篇幅,到最后加重点口味应该也是顺理成章的吧.
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