wakakahei 发表于 2021-3-11 12:11   全显示 1楼
文章很不错啊 一篇中篇文章将各种剧情要素都集齐了~仙侠,常识替换,药物辅助,逆袭等等 牛的!
不过看得出来作者后续稍稍有点着急了,在反杀和复仇情节上走得太快,少了一些设计感,虽然后续的色气的语言弥补了一些这个问题,但是还是可以更好嘛~~ 不要着急 好文耐磨嘛~~
对了 文章还是有几处错别字, 我看完忘了复制,不知道再哪去啦~ 记得校对一下啊
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