idleuse 发表于 2010-11-15 11:28   全显示 1楼
谢谢风大更文。难道佟就是护士长说的那个男人么？ 还有这个伏笔不错，焉是不是也会和护士长一样迷失，最后主角肯定要用尽办法去拯救焉，这比单纯的干掉佟更需要智慧和耐心。
大大的文章很有味道，不过色度欠佳，作为小说合格，作为色文还需要一些加强，呵呵，一点个人意见，希望没有冒犯大大，谢谢更文，红心送上。
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